The Happy Twin Brothers
A pregnant woman lived in the jungles of Africa and was
about to give birth to he child. To her surprise, she actually had twin boys.
These were not ordinary children though, as they were miraculously born almost
fully-grown. She named the twins Luemba and Mavungu. Shortly after birth, the
brothers set out to live their own lives and become independent men.
First comes the tale of Mavungu. He learns of the daughter
of Nzambi, who is the most beautiful woman in all of Africa. Upon hearing of
the woman, he instantly sets out to make her his wife. To that point, she had
refused every man that had come to win her heart, regardless of his status or
wealth. Since Nzambi refused to see her daughter unhappy, she promises to never
marry her off unless it is to a man that she approves of. After a very long
journey through many towns, Mavungu arrives at the town of Nzambi. The first
thing that he sees when he enters the town is a gorgeous woman working in the
garden outside of her hut. The woman’s beauty made Mavungu forget why he had
traveled this far in the first place and he began to talk her. After just a few
minutes, the two acted as though they had known each other for years. Suddenly,
the woman told Mavungu that she must be going. Before he could even ask her
where he could see her again, she disappeared.
Remembering why he had journeyed in first place, Mavungu
went to the house of Nzambi and asked to meet her daughter. Nzambi warns him
that her daughter has rejected every man she has seen so far, but calls for her
anyways. Much to Mavungu’s surprise, the woman who appears from a doorway is
the very woman he had met previously in the garden. The woman smiles and rushes
to Mavungu, hugging him. Nzambi can’t believe her eyes and her daughter says
that she has found her husband. A great feast and party is thrown, then the
couple gets married and get escorted into a hut of their own to spend the night
in.
In the hut, Mavungu notices there is a circle of mirrors,
each of which shows the reflection of a different town. There is only one town
that Mavungu does not recognize and he tells his new wife that he wants to
adventure there. She becomes extremely sad and tells him not to go because
nobody has every gone there before and lived to tell the tale. Ignoring his
wife’s pleas, Mavungu sets out on his adventure to the mysterious town.
Now fore the tale of Luemba, the brothers had not seen each
other since the day of their birth, but Luemba finds himself in much of the
same situation as Mavungu. Luemba is happily married to a wife of his own, but
has recently heard of a mysterious town. After weeks of traveling, Luemba
finally sees the town. He also sees a man about to enter the town and as he
gets closer he realizes it’s his twin brother!
They meet just outside the town and begin to catch up with
each other for a while, when they meet another curious traveler. The third man
steps onto the path that runs through the town and immediately disappears.
After seeing this, the brothers decide to halt their adventure and return to
their wives. They move into the same town together and stay friends until their
deaths.
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Author’s Note:
This is a retelling of The Twin Brothers, from the Congo Unit. Most of the original story has been changed because the ending of the
original story was pretty depressing. In the readings, Mavungu dies when he
enters the town because an old woman kills him. Luemba then seeks out his
brother and kills the old woman. Luemba revives Mavungu along with all the
other people that have died there. There is then a big fight about who should
own the revived people and Mavungu kills Luemba. After being revived, Luemba
then kills Mavungu.
Bibliography:
The Twin Brothers from Notes on the Folklore of the Fjort, by Richard Edward Dennett (1898).
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Wow what an interesting retelling. I wonder why they were born almost full grown? I like this retelling better than the original. This one is much more cheery and less depressing and violent. How cool that despite being separated at birth they still were able to find one another. Also not only that but they saved each other from entering the town of no return. Very cool retelling.
ReplyDeleteInteresting enough, I am also a twin. My twin brother is named Alex. We are actually fraternal twins instead of identical so we really don't look that much alike. After reading your author's note I agree that the original is pretty depressing. The changes that you made for your story were great. I think the addition of the brothers living together in the same town until their death was a good one. I would like to think that me and my brother retire in the same town.
ReplyDeleteI cannot imagine giving birth to twins that were fully-grown! What a way to entice your readers! I wonder what the role of coincidence plays in stories from the Congo. I will say that your story seems to end with a nice idea of returning to home. Having read the author's note, I see that you avoided quite the gruesome ending.
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